Reviews for Off the Deep End
incrediblectopus chapter 1 . 4/1/2016
NO ONE DIED? REALLY? Was a cute story, though.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/6/2014
Finally! Finally! You have NO IDEA I have been looking for a Titanic slash story. Thank you.
Ibbit chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
Well tecnically, people did die.. just not the main people. I like this, but if feels much too short. And James's introduction seemed too formal. But! You're the writer. And you've done great.

Luck writing and all that.

~ibbit
Channitut chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
I was kind of scared, they were going to die, but they didn't. Yay, happy ending:D
LivinLyfe2TheFullest chapter 1 . 3/18/2011
yay no one died! :D

and aw Paul and James are so cute and sweet together
LateNightTurtle chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
i love how you mentioned Jack and Rose when they went outside at midnight to meet on the deck. haha :] this was absolutely adorable! i loved it! i love all ur oneshots and stories! :]
eatyourheartout chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
I'm so conflicted with Titanic slash (you know, since I OBVIOUSLY read copious amounts of it...), because on the one hand: SLASH. On the other, the ship's going down...and they're most likely doing to die. And, as much as I love angst, I don't think I would have been able to stand it if one of them died. So thank you so much for not, you know, killing one, or both, of them off.

Oh, and the Jack and Rose cameo was pure genius.

My only complaint? Is that there wasn't more of this. And I kept imagining them talking with British accents (because that makes them like 20 percent hotter). And I was squeeing at their names...and pronouncing them with British accents in my head. Haha.
AlwaysTheNegativeOptimist chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
Aww. This is cute.

:p
Muzica-chan chapter 1 . 9/2/2010
My hat is off to you. I could never have managed to do third person present tense, with the exception of when I'm RPing online. XD
jag finns inte chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
please tell me the other couple on the deck arnt Jack and Whats her name from the movie... because that would be so amusing
chronicallyhectic chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
Naw :) The movie always got me rather emotional, and I was quite scared that you'd make Paul die for a while. Or both of them. That would've been bloody depressing D: But yeah, this was a rather sweet and happy story really, disregarding the fact that a thousand or so people died in it. Oh, the irony...
RokitToMars chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
Seriously, I hate Titanic. But if this was the movie, I probably would have loved it.

Not just the happy ending, but this seemed way more realistic. Haha, weird? I don't know.

Anyways, really cute. Very fluffy. I loved the bits where they're battling with their own self control, it just seemed so real. That want, but the unsureity.

Great one-shot. Haha, wonderful present for bbal (:
whereismyorangehoodie chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
Haha! Awkward fluff! I love it, this is really too cute...although I'm really curious to know what's gonna happen after they get back on land...
Flower-of-the-Earth chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
OHH MY DAYS AW!
annouska chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
I'm ashamed for myself. At first, when I saw the summary I actually debated not reading this. I should know better than that, because, apparently, you can even rock dramatic Titanic shameless fluff! GREAT job - and thank god (or,well,you) for the happy ending. I couldn't stand

it if ANOTHER cute Titanic couple got separated! But despite the happy ending, my heart feels heavy..

I guess 3rd person POV in present tense can do that to you, especially if the author knows what they're doing ;D
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