Reviews for The Bully and The Brain
RunFree chapter 10 . 11/8/2010
OMG! Please update again soon!
RDScholar chapter 9 . 11/7/2010
I am really, really liking this story! I hope you update soon :)
midnight to dusk chapter 9 . 11/2/2010
this is the bestest :)

i love this story
Molly chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
The story is frankly unrealistic. If you want to add detail, dont put kitchey names in place of locations. You can imply that an area is poor besides noting the low quality materials they have. Life is not all about materialism. Some of your words do not mean what you think they do. Take another look at demeanor. It does not mean what a person looks like, it is how they carry themselves and their temperment. When you expose a character you can explain a background through details instead of just saying and this happened and then this happened. You can imply that the mother is gone through an empty chair, or a comment about the mother walking out. Keep these things in mind and your story would be much stronger.
Bumblebee303 chapter 9 . 10/27/2010
Really enjoying the concept and plot of your story! can't wait for the next few chapters :)
Sybil14 chapter 9 . 10/25/2010
Ah! Oh no, write write write! Is Pete taking them to Emmy's house? You're killing me! Keep going, it's awesome! (remember who this is?)
abcdElla chapter 8 . 10/20/2010
Yay! I was so glad to find that you had updated the next chapter so quickly. I think this has to be my favourite chapter yet, I really enjoyed learning more about Pat and his past. Keep up the good work! :D
abcdElla chapter 7 . 10/20/2010
Another great chapter! Corrine is a great character. I can't wait until the next chapter. Please don't take too long to update! Please! :D
abcdElla chapter 6 . 10/19/2010
I love it! Pat has to be my favourite character, good on him for showing Pete where he stands! The best part of the chapter was when he stuck up for Emmy. I can't wait for the next chapter, I really really really hope you update soon.
midnight to dusk chapter 6 . 10/14/2010
this story is really interesting :) how many more chapters are there?
abcdElla chapter 5 . 10/9/2010
I actually love this story. Each chapter gets better and better. I really hope you update soon.
SimplyLily94 chapter 5 . 10/8/2010
i love this story! (: its so beautiful! (: hope you update soon
daydreamer4life chapter 4 . 10/2/2010
This is a very good story! Can you please write more!:)
abcdElla chapter 3 . 9/13/2010
This is an amazing story. I can't wait to learn more about Patrick, he's a really interesting character. I hope you decide to continue writing this story, I will definitley be keeping my eye on this story. Loved it!
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