Reviews for Virtual Reality
pbgurl chapter 7 . 9/18/2010
OWW! :( him breaking her arm like that...

Can't wait to learn more about the guy.

-Liz :D
DancingBells chapter 6 . 9/17/2010
"I was an Eagle Scout back when and I remember little things that could help us."

""Possible," Nate muttered then continued." He changed his name! Do you miss the other story? xD

That's it that I found.

This is pretty awesome so far! Can't wait until the dude makes his appearance.

Till next.
pbgurl chapter 6 . 9/16/2010
"Possible," Nate muttered then continued. "'Look for the Angel of Darkness hidden behind a wall of stone.'"

Did you mean Lance? lol, for a second I imagined Nate making a cameo. _

hmm...can't wait to meet the Angel of Darkness!

-Liz :D
CleoQueen chapter 6 . 9/16/2010
Ooh that sounds realy exciting!
ChubbyKid chapter 5 . 9/15/2010
I Like it!

Can't Wait til the next chapter!
CleoQueen chapter 5 . 9/14/2010
Cool twist with the pirates :)
pbgurl chapter 5 . 9/12/2010
haha, things really are starting to get more interesting and more bizarre. _

-Liz :D
DancingBells chapter 5 . 9/12/2010
"Ye really don't this place do ya?" Snare asked suddenly.

Ye don't like it? Nah. xD

Oh oh I love this. Is weird, but cool. And weird things are awesome. The only thing I don't like. Is waiting. But I normally only read the stories that're done. But now I realize it's tons better being there as it's made.

Till next.
thesecretsinmyhair chapter 5 . 9/12/2010
wow, everything moves quickly. one second shes at home, next she's jumping off ships '
CleoQueen chapter 4 . 9/11/2010
Oh this is exciting and really beans!
righthere431 chapter 3 . 9/11/2010
Yes she's going to the cruise! I hope she has fun!
righthere431 chapter 2 . 9/11/2010
Ooh a two week cruise sounds amazing!
thesecretsinmyhair chapter 4 . 9/11/2010
barbie? i should have come up with that! :) LOL

i love how Lance AND Melody are freaked, ya know Brother/sister bonds...!

i suspect Riley is in on something, since she's so...confident...ready...smiley?

Also known as Mismiley,


PS- have you heard of the new PJO series? its coming out soon! although Annabeth and Percy aren't main charies, they are side! if you look online you'll find chapter one! :P
DancingBells chapter 4 . 9/11/2010
Yay! Got my laptop back for a bit. Though it's extra slow. Apperantly that happens when you drop it.

Aw, I like the romance bit.

And 'Ray' is better than 'Rah bask uh'. xD

Is this meant to be 'your'? "I don't call you're texting stupid."

And man. I was so waiting for some extra clean white big sparkly ship. I would be uneasy with it too.

Till next!
pbgurl chapter 4 . 9/10/2010
yeah...Barbie is kinda creepy. _

-Liz :D
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