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   pbgurl chapter 7 . 9/18/2010 OWW! :( him breaking her arm like that... Can't wait to learn more about the guy. -Liz :D |
| DancingBells chapter 6 . 9/17/2010 "I was an Eagle Scout back when and I remember little things that could help us." ""Possible," Nate muttered then continued." He changed his name! Do you miss the other story? xD That's it that I found. This is pretty awesome so far! Can't wait until the dude makes his appearance. Till next. |
| pbgurl chapter 6 . 9/16/2010 "Possible," Nate muttered then continued. "'Look for the Angel of Darkness hidden behind a wall of stone.'" Did you mean Lance? lol, for a second I imagined Nate making a cameo. _ hmm...can't wait to meet the Angel of Darkness! -Liz :D |
| CleoQueen chapter 6 . 9/16/2010 Ooh that sounds realy exciting! |
| ChubbyKid chapter 5 . 9/15/2010 I Like it! Can't Wait til the next chapter! |
| CleoQueen chapter 5 . 9/14/2010 Cool twist with the pirates :) |
| pbgurl chapter 5 . 9/12/2010 haha, things really are starting to get more interesting and more bizarre. _ -Liz :D |
| DancingBells chapter 5 . 9/12/2010 "Ye really don't this place do ya?" Snare asked suddenly. Ye don't like it? Nah. xD Oh oh I love this. Is weird, but cool. And weird things are awesome. The only thing I don't like. Is waiting. But I normally only read the stories that're done. But now I realize it's tons better being there as it's made. Till next. |
| thesecretsinmyhair chapter 5 . 9/12/2010 wow, everything moves quickly. one second shes at home, next she's jumping off ships ' |
| CleoQueen chapter 4 . 9/11/2010 Oh this is exciting and really weird...cool beans! |
| righthere431 chapter 3 . 9/11/2010 Yes she's going to the cruise! I hope she has fun! |
| righthere431 chapter 2 . 9/11/2010 Ooh a two week cruise sounds amazing! |
| thesecretsinmyhair chapter 4 . 9/11/2010 barbie? i should have come up with that! :) LOL i love how Lance AND Melody are freaked, ya know Brother/sister bonds...! i suspect Riley is in on something, since she's so...confident...ready...smiley? Also known as Mismiley, Fafa PS- have you heard of the new PJO series? its coming out soon! although Annabeth and Percy aren't main charies, they are side! if you look online you'll find chapter one! :P |
| DancingBells chapter 4 . 9/11/2010 Yay! Got my laptop back for a bit. Though it's extra slow. Apperantly that happens when you drop it. Aw, I like the romance bit. And 'Ray' is better than 'Rah bask uh'. xD Is this meant to be 'your'? "I don't call you're texting stupid." And man. I was so waiting for some extra clean white big sparkly ship. I would be uneasy with it too. Till next! |
| pbgurl chapter 4 . 9/10/2010 yeah...Barbie is kinda creepy. _ -Liz :D |