|Reviews for Virtual Reality|
| pbgurl chapter 7 . 9/18/2010
OWW! :( him breaking her arm like that...
Can't wait to learn more about the guy.
| DancingBells chapter 6 . 9/17/2010
"I was an Eagle Scout back when and I remember little things that could help us."
""Possible," Nate muttered then continued." He changed his name! Do you miss the other story? xD
That's it that I found.
This is pretty awesome so far! Can't wait until the dude makes his appearance.
| pbgurl chapter 6 . 9/16/2010
"Possible," Nate muttered then continued. "'Look for the Angel of Darkness hidden behind a wall of stone.'"
Did you mean Lance? lol, for a second I imagined Nate making a cameo. _
hmm...can't wait to meet the Angel of Darkness!
| CleoQueen chapter 6 . 9/16/2010
Ooh that sounds realy exciting!
| ChubbyKid chapter 5 . 9/15/2010
I Like it!
Can't Wait til the next chapter!
| CleoQueen chapter 5 . 9/14/2010
Cool twist with the pirates :)
| pbgurl chapter 5 . 9/12/2010
haha, things really are starting to get more interesting and more bizarre. _
| DancingBells chapter 5 . 9/12/2010
"Ye really don't this place do ya?" Snare asked suddenly.
Ye don't like it? Nah. xD
Oh oh I love this. Is weird, but cool. And weird things are awesome. The only thing I don't like. Is waiting. But I normally only read the stories that're done. But now I realize it's tons better being there as it's made.
| thesecretsinmyhair chapter 5 . 9/12/2010
wow, everything moves quickly. one second shes at home, next she's jumping off ships '
| CleoQueen chapter 4 . 9/11/2010
Oh this is exciting and really weird...cool beans!
| righthere431 chapter 3 . 9/11/2010
Yes she's going to the cruise! I hope she has fun!
| righthere431 chapter 2 . 9/11/2010
Ooh a two week cruise sounds amazing!
| thesecretsinmyhair chapter 4 . 9/11/2010
barbie? i should have come up with that! :) LOL
i love how Lance AND Melody are freaked, ya know Brother/sister bonds...!
i suspect Riley is in on something, since she's so...confident...ready...smiley?
Also known as Mismiley,
PS- have you heard of the new PJO series? its coming out soon! although Annabeth and Percy aren't main charies, they are side! if you look online you'll find chapter one! :P
| DancingBells chapter 4 . 9/11/2010
Yay! Got my laptop back for a bit. Though it's extra slow. Apperantly that happens when you drop it.
Aw, I like the romance bit.
And 'Ray' is better than 'Rah bask uh'. xD
Is this meant to be 'your'? "I don't call you're texting stupid."
And man. I was so waiting for some extra clean white big sparkly ship. I would be uneasy with it too.
| pbgurl chapter 4 . 9/10/2010
yeah...Barbie is kinda creepy. _