Reviews for Breaking Blue
AnywhereYouGo chapter 2 . 1/27/2011
Does the poem depict how she really feels? Even if it's subconsciously?
writerwriter33 chapter 2 . 1/26/2011
OMG! i rly like ambers character already even if she hasnt done much. gabe is deff crushing on jackie, so i cant wait to see were this all goes.

write more soon!

Sadie :D
writerwriter33 chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
Wow, i rly like how gabe and jackie work together as a duo. even in the first chapter you can tell that theyre super best friends. theyre both really strong characters and you developed them rly well.

on to chapter 2!

Sadie :D
Bitterblue23 chapter 2 . 1/26/2011
I think this is really great (and I think you should update more often, because I can't wait that long next time). But yeah. I love the fact that Jackie's a lesbian, and that this is kind of really cliched and really not at the same time. Toby XD
lukas10 chapter 2 . 1/25/2011
i find it kind of funny... poor gabe thought.. but i'm pretty much sure that the poem was about him, so technically she is savig herself for him right? well, i guess i'll have to find out :P

i hope, soon :P

-M
Bitterblue23 chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
This is so good! Update!

Toby. XD