Ooohhh... It's sooo shorttt! I need more :D

I like the story, but it's unfinished. You should add some and came up to a nice ending please?

Awwww! They're cute, but I think the whole thing feels slightly unfinished, maybe you could add to it?

Ha ha, yes! I love how stubborn they both are, makes for a good story ) And I DO hope she didn't chicken out of that last dare ;) loved it!

I really enjoyed this story. Your details and work was well not worry about others crittisisem, it is mostly important what your idea is and that you try YOUR best. On my opinion you should keep writting this story it's idea is unique. Not many stories make people want to keep reading but this one does also you can really picture the story while reading it. You should deffinetly keep writting you have a gift for it. - March316

its cute:)

Cliche but the dare part gives it a twist.

Go ahead and continue this if you want to.

Hahaha I kind of liked the whole dare thing it they made me laugh. I have to say very very good job I really enjoyed it. I really liked the end [cliched a bit yes but I'm all for that kind of stuff so I didn't care!:-)] so again GOOD JOB!

i like it! you should really update sooner!

this is good :)

Fluffy and cute. :D I loved the "dare" theme going on here (although I'm way too chicken myself to do dares, haha). Julie is a charming character, with all her snark and bravery and whatnot. I can't believe she really made Logan go sky-diving!

I would expand this further, not into a chaptered thing (keep it a one-shot!), but maybe add in some more dares, and a little section leading up to Julie making friends with Mason (the sudden "After I returned Mason's eraser and told him the story behind it we kind of…bonded." was, well, sudden). I like what you have, which is why it would be great if you added more!

Then, there are some nitpicky typos (a missed period here, an out-of-place comma there) but it's nothing a quick proofread couldn't fix. :)

OMG! You HAVE to, like, continue this or something! It was really good and caught my attention from the beginning. And just so you know, you write better than most people whose first language is English. Does that make sense? lol, Anyway...

Toby. XD

Ohmigosh, AWW . :D!