Reviews for The Story Of Jimbo The Deppresed Little Frog
devious-quill chapter 1 . 9/7/2006
Might make a good children's book with some tweaking, but who is your target audience? You have a very childlike story, but lots of tongue in cheek humor that children would be sure to miss. Also, there are some misspellings - (begger - beggar) and your use of square brackets is incorrect. You should be using parentheses.
CyberDreamer chapter 1 . 12/15/2001
...I read it twice and I'm only laughing now. But that's all right. Let me kill a beggar frog next time, okay? _
PlasmaBomb chapter 1 . 5/27/2001
I liked it, the end, THANKYOU VERY MUCH, goodnight. -
KyokoHanashu chapter 1 . 5/19/2001
Erebus chapter 1 . 5/18/2001
* daceing around* I LOVE IT! now i have to go before thouse men in whiet lab coatd find me see ya!
Irenicus chapter 1 . 5/15/2001
Gaaaaaaaah...Ha ha ha! That was really good! I hope you write a sequal! (There, I gave you a good review! Now where's my five bucks?)