|Reviews for SHIFT|
| Guest chapter 16 . 12/20/2018
please update that sexy voice story
| Guest chapter 16 . 6/18/2018
Please keep writing this story
| Emily chapter 16 . 12/13/2017
I absolutely love your stories they are so addicting to read.
| guest chapter 16 . 11/23/2016
Nikki needs to get over herself. She is a fat ass skinny bashing animal whore. I am so done with her drama.
| joanna chapter 13 . 10/19/2016
Miles mom reaction is very natural. If my child was ripped apart by a shifter animal i would have thrown nikki out of my life too. My child comes first not the supernatural shit nikki got herself involved with and don't care about her feelings too. Being torn apart by a jealous animal is not funny.
| Shiina chapter 4 . 8/19/2016
I'm starting to feel seriously offended as someone who's pretty thin. Nicki keeps bashing skinny people, it's annoying. And seriously, she's got no backbone, she's freaking dramatic, as well as a crybaby. I have no respect for her. I'm done.
| Shiina chapter 3 . 8/19/2016
Aaah... An other doormat as the protag. Also, I don't like Miles.
| Guest chapter 16 . 8/5/2015
Wicked! Is there another chapter for this story?
| Guest chapter 16 . 8/4/2015
Cool! Is there another chapter for this story?
| minor5chord chapter 16 . 3/15/2015
I like this so far! I won't tell you you need a beta; obviously many other people have already said that. If you really don't want to get one, my advice is to wait a day after you've finished writing a chapter. Save it, close it completely, and don't look at it for 24 hours. THEN go back and re-read it to yourself (out loud works best for me). That way you are less likely to skip over words and phrases. Reading it out loud also forces you to go through it slower, and prevents you from glossing over things that might need to be fixed.
I hope that Nicki gets a little more of a backbone as the story progresses-otherwise I feel like Tye is going to end up walking all over her! I am glad that they've finally initiated some adult-type touching though! I'm also interested in hearing more about the universe they live in-as well as both Nicki and Tye's pasts.
I hope you continue to update!
| Guest chapter 16 . 11/29/2014
Awesome story, thanks for sharing
| Grappla chapter 2 . 10/9/2014
Usually F/M stories bore me to tears and I just don’t read them, but you have hit my every guilty pleasure I look for when I’m hunting down something to read. You have going a good use of supernatural creatures, which I’m hoping the variety of creatures will increase and I’m really liking Nicole so far. Spelling mistakes throughout, but I’m the kind of reader that can ignore them in the name of a good story/plot, anyway first/second chapter this fic feels like it has potential and I’m excited to read more, got this on watch and hoping it’ll be updated soon, keep up the good work, I’m off to read more.
| vampire26 chapter 16 . 7/22/2014
I love your characters and the plot! This is so fascinating and I just love this story. :)
| Guest chapter 16 . 4/29/2014
Truly imaginative story and believable
I like how thought out it is, with the different species and even types in each species. Good job :)
| Lerene chapter 16 . 4/24/2014
From the Author:
So sorry about the LONG wait. Chapter 15 sucks. I wrote about 300 words and then couldn't figure how to write more. So rewrote it and didn't get much more but I did make it sound better than it did at first. Hopefully this stubborn chapter stops misbehaving soon. But I am still working on it! I been writing stuff for future chapters and also making notes about book two.
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Until the next chapter enjoy this little excerpt and feel free to guess whoses talking:
"What happened in here?"
"I'm trying to be Fun Fu."