Reviews for Third Company: Alliance
Mysterious MD chapter 26 . 11/2/2010
That was a well written, happy/sad update. I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors in it. It's great to see Lani and Nikolaas in love, it makes things work out in the end for Lani. It's unfortunate how Dr. Farrow had betrayed them, and how Lani killed him. But it's a happy ending with Nikolaas and Lani together and happy. This was a great story, and I look forward to reading your next one. Keep up the great writing.
tell it to the sky chapter 25 . 10/30/2010
yay they have finally told each other how they feel, took them long enough!

have a feeling that Animagia wont be too pleased to find her a Vamp again but they can deal!
Mysterious MD chapter 25 . 10/26/2010
That was a happy chapter, and we get to see the real emotions of both Nikolaas and Lani. It was well written, I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors. It was good to see them break through their real emotions, and I feel like you did a good job with it, you didn't rush for them to put out how they really feel. It was a well written chapter, and I look forward to reading your next update. Keep up the great writing.
Mysterious MD chapter 24 . 10/21/2010
That was an intense chapter. It was well written chapter, I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors. It was a good chapter, Nikolas came in and was captured. Vanessa is a traitor. And Lani is possibly dying after everyone came to save her and Nikolas. I look forward to reading what happens next, keep up the great writing.
Mysterious MD chapter 23 . 10/18/2010
That was a good chapter. It was well written, I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors. It was interesting, we see Calcon once again scheming away. And Lani is captured again, so it will be interesting to see if Nikolas does indeed come for her. I can't wait to read your next chapter, keep up the great writing. I thought this chapter was a particularly good one.

And I look forward to reading the third book in November.
tell it to the sky chapter 22 . 10/18/2010
its not out of the blue. something bad between them was going to have happen eventually. but I'm glad she has released that she loves Nikolaas. but her being kidnapped again! he needs to save her!
Mysterious MD chapter 22 . 10/17/2010
It was an interesting chapter. It was well written, I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors. It seemed perhaps a bit quick, but I think her realization was pretty well written. I look forward to seeing what you write next, keep up the good writing.
tell it to the sky chapter 21 . 10/16/2010
well didn't expect that.

so sad that i am really crying!
Mysterious MD chapter 21 . 10/16/2010
Woah, that was a crazy chapter. It was well written, I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors. It was definitely interesting, Nikolas calling off the marriage. And Lani trying to understand why. I feel like there are probably ulterior motives at play behind the situation. I look forward to reading your next update, keep up the good writing.
LadyFelton1994 chapter 21 . 10/15/2010
GASP! Whats going to happen next?
HeartRose chapter 20 . 10/13/2010
Really great chapter!

Can't wait to see what happens next!
Mysterious MD chapter 20 . 10/13/2010
That was certainly an interesting chapter, with a worrisome ending. It was well written, I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors. It was good to see Nikolas and Lani getting along better, and Lani trying to be fair to Nikolas. The ending was interesting, I wonder what's up. Keep up the good writing, I look forward to your next update.
Mysterious MD chapter 19 . 10/11/2010
Well that was a sad/happy chapter. It was well written, I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors. And although it was depressing for Lani, having to see horrible things and fight people, and then being shunned, it was happier at the end, especially with her and Nikolas on better terms. Keep up the good writing, I look forward to reading what happens next.
LadyFelton1994 chapter 19 . 10/11/2010
no problem i was wondering bc i didnt reconzied the charatcers good job on that chapter
tell it to the sky chapter 19 . 10/10/2010
umm i think that you might have posted this in the wrong story!
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