|Reviews for Still|
| instant bliss chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
Now this is my kind of poem - it's rough and raw and, most importantly, it feels REAL. Maybe that just goes to show I can relate.
I like the way you don't pull your own punches. You write straight through "you found me, lifted me, / I asked you to hit me." This piece reminds me of the Antony and the Johnsons song "Cripple and the Starfish".