|Reviews for The somber bells have gone someplace|
| Postscript624 chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
You've got a righteous groove rocking here, and I can appreciate that.
Pros: "just kaleidoscope colors colliding on hearts and paper,/in the black-and-white raindbow of a pen.", just OOZES flow/funk/style, definitely used from triple score words here.
Cons: a bit distant emotionally (to me anyways, it didn't really speak to me [exception: "no incessant need for choices"]), "and it's liberating" sort of breaks flow which is cool except then you've got a space which naturally breaks flow so it feels a bit unnecessary/excessive and then REALLY breaks the flow.
| Brat Harvis chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
I Like the simplicity of this poem it's rather intriguing is it dealing with an addiction to music? I am all for it.