Reviews for Habit
A Fire Rose chapter 1 . 8/30/2011
Hey! Well, to be honest, the use of second person doesn't really fit this well. This doesn't relate to me, and probably doesn't relate to others. But if you make it a personal poem, it fits better. Also, there is no steady rhythm or formal pattern, which makes it a little choppy. Of course, formality is optional, but it helps. Great concept - especially with the time stamps. Good lesson for people!
Negasi chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
I like this. I won't lie, I saw the title and saw this going somewhere completely different, but I enjoyed this. It shows the growth of character, the joys of success.
BlameMyMuses chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
I love this! I know the frustration of composing and how it's all worth it in the end.

The way you describe the whole composing process really strikes a chord.

Lovely work, even if it's describing how utterly frustrating composing is. (frustrating and worth it)
lymli chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
it's like a diary, that's interesting.