Reviews for Oxidation
darkershadeofpale chapter 1 . 6/2/2011
This makes me think of starting fires. In a loud and messy and quite possibly wicked way.

It's a pretty haiku with a pretty title. Indeed.

. darker shade of pale
Sakina the Fallen Angel chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
Took me a while to get the title, as my chemistry degree-in-progress brain refused to see it as anything else but a formula! Beautiful and concise - the first line made me think of warm, summer days, something much more innocent than the haiku implies.

~ Sakina x
nickyO chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
Great last line. :) and extra :)
lymli chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
the wick part made me think about being burned by the sun.

nice haiku.
Chasmodai Blue chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
This was an amazing haiku with a good title.

You know how to use the form to your advantage, and that's rare but magnificent.
David deHaas chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
I interpret this haiku as the wick being life, and the clouds and sun being the mystery of existence. Fate works in mysterious ways.