|Reviews for Faded Marquee|
| MyNameIsDave chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
Ok. This is a marvelous piece. It's so good. I love the rhyme scheme, as well as the flow of the entire song. It puts you in a mood and rhythm, and it doesn't let go. I love the imagery, especially in the first verse with the sea. I could go on and on...
I don't even feel the need to consider writing anymore, when my work can't possibly stand up to yours. Ah, I give up.. and pave the way for better writers, like yourself!
| collypollyy chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
I told you I would forget about this. Me and my wonderful memory. I loved this, unlike the other person. I find it very understanding, unlike the other person ;). I can relate to this because we have the same life?
| donxcat chapter 1 . 9/7/2010
"not sure where it came from" does that mean that you did not write it?
very well written but sort of confusing.