Reviews for The amazing soul of Alice Tipton
Scribus Phasmatus chapter 4 . 6/24/2013
The story grew with every chapter as did the quality, I believe, and by the third chapter the present tense style that the story is written in felt natural and I was left wondering in the world of Alice Tipton from there on, although past tense would have been my choice of storytelling.
The story has a natural childish feel to it and its full of great moments to cherish like the bunny alarm clock and Alice specking with a mouth full of lasagna. The story has some moments of tension like the promise of a world of wonders hiding in the wardrobe or the what if many sleeches would came after an "amazing sole"; which I wish the story would be more focused around them and/or finalize each chapter to leave me hooked for the next one.
All and all it was a diverting read.
P.S: Kudos to you for writing this story, I think you are very brave and talented.
Ivyanne Gardenia-Louise Smith chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
This is really good. You have a few little things you should edit (i.e. punctuation), but other than that it's really good and you seem really talented. :)
Wendy Thompson135th chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
If he's invisible, how do we know he's green?