Reviews for hell is
steffxnie chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
Hmm, it sounds abrupt in way, but I like it. Do you mind explaining the second line or thoughts behind this piece? I like 'all i ever asked for was sorrow in buckets, not a pill in a teaspoon', the imagery is good. I like how you added 'A house painted the wrong color' too, it emphasizes how it is out of place.