Reviews for the unlit orchard
qubed chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
In a word, this poem is: Sharp.
smoke another grin chapter 5 . 8/25/2011
cold, but beautifully powerful. the words are evocative and full of dreams.
Michael Jackson freak chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
this is a beautiful poem. its colorful, descriptive, keep going!
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 1/25/2011
"Be thoughtless when it counts

And thoughtful when it doesn't"

Great lines. I loved this piece!
Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 9/10/2010
I especially love the first 3 stanza, amazing. Keep it Up!