Reviews for Too Busy To Notice
Just a little Hyper chapter 2 . 1/29/2011
Angel, this made me cry! No lies. I have tears streaming down my cheeks. This has real emotion in it, I can tell. It's not faked in the slightest, and that's the saddest part.

I know your mum can be neglectful at times and I know that she can be rather mean to you, but I just want to tell you that you have got to be strong and keep pushing on.

Who knows, maybe it's a good thing that your mum isn't particularly nice to you. If it inspires you to write amazing work like this, then maybe she's doing you a favour in the long run. Nice job, Angel.
JasperHalesMistress chapter 2 . 10/16/2010
The emotion in this is great. I love the way that you have sectioned it and just well done. :)

I hope you are alright love.
Candyheart9 chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
This was so sad! A great, very sad poem.