I think you did an excellent job on this story line.

I like your story so I hope that you keep up with it. The fact that Melody is so strong is very nice and different from most stories.

ok so this story is realy interesting. I am curious to see how Melody and Ted's relationship pans out with their growing attraction and the fact that Ted is gay. I love their banter, its amusing to me.

There is no way Ted is actually gay.