|Reviews for Green|
| UnchartedAlex chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
Interesting and well, good hook.
I gotta say that I enjoy your use of the first person perspective. You do it very well. All I can say is watch out for lulls in the narrative. Im not saying its boring, only that there were moments where I had to push myself through the story.
Hmm... Maybe Im just an impatient turd-basket.
Anyway, I really do like it and am looking forward to the second chapter.
Dont disappoint! Youve got potential!
| drostste7 chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
That was great! Please update
| Riki-Biki chapter 1 . 9/11/2010