Reviews for White Horse |
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![]() ![]() ![]() That was super good! I love that he didn't cave, emotional blackmailers are horrible horrible people and I'm glad he's free of that once and for all :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Best one yet, methinks. Well done mate:) Just 2 things (sorry!) - 1. "clad only in some lazy basketball with a loose waist" - you missed out a word, I think. 2. Little typo: "IT was an exhilirating " - Other than those tiny things, another great story :) bitch best promise me you'll never stop writing! |