Reviews for Monday Skies
natmarie chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
Wow. Wow. Wow. I adore this...really I do. The ryhme pattern is there but everything seems to float along, kind of like a song and the images are vivid and sharp. Perfect for the emotions that radiate out of the poem. I can totally relate. I think a lot of people can. PS. love the name change, hope all is well. Miss hearing from you (guess that means I need to work on my poetry again huh? :)
young and the reckless chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
ah! simply amazing.

i can relate, i can relate, i can relate.

and now i shall favorite.

(seriously. awesome.)
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Oh wow. I am so in love with this piece, it is just incredible.

"You're the sand in my shoes", what a way to describe being weighed down. The third and fifth stanzas are my absolute favorite. Powerful words in this that paint and clear and beautiful picture. Favorite
lymli chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
it's sad, I like the rhyme. this felt sometimes love can't win.