Reviews for Drabbles of Creative Writing
triple vice chapter 4 . 3/18/2011
Booker Mikey! Woot, woot! I wanna see more!
I-Know-Everything chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
Cute!
Midnight113 chapter 9 . 10/22/2010
I really loved this particular piece, it was so sad especially the last stanza. Well done!
Toxic-noodle725 chapter 9 . 10/15/2010
I love the poem about the phone. Creative and oh so sad.
Kassandra Duric chapter 4 . 9/23/2010
Well, I can't wait to see how this actually ends out.

I'd go with Brooker forgetting all about Cici and hooking up with Mikey, it seems they both secretly want to be more than friends any way. Cici seems like a bitch any way. lol

Hope you put the argument between both Cici and Brooker as well. That would be entertaining.

I think you should put more description on Eli, OZ and Cici.I know I would like to know more about them other than their eye color and hair color. I mean you brought them in strongly, whether that was intentional or not is another story, so just put a little more description in for them. Maybe even put in somewhere how everyone met.

Oh, and more about why Brooker's dad usually kicks him out. You mension his dad kicking him out, maybe you could just put one more little insident in there to enfasise on that part.

That's all I can see for now. If I remember more I'll just let you know on AIM. lol
RenHen chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
I love this.