Reviews for The Life of Jayden 'Suri'
diwu6398 chapter 3 . 11/9/2010
Hey! You updated!

I'm sorry that you have a suckish science teacher, but he sounds a lot cooler than mine. My teacher has the worst fashion sense, and I don't care about fashion at all, so that's saying something.

All the gay guys' names are Jayden. Pick something original. Most people don't have kids expecting them to be gay, so they usually DON'T give girly names to guys or boyish names to girls. I know a Sean who's gay. He's my bestest biffle. Not really, I just know him.

Yes, it was uber short, but that's okay. I wouldn't have read it if it was long, because I'm doing NaNoWriMo, and that's giving me some mental disorder called "OH MY GOD IF I DON'T FINISH I'M GOING CRAZY!"

I'll add you on FB later. GOT TO WRITE ANOTHER COUPLE THOUSAND WORDS. I write in class all the time.
TheDarkestAbyss chapter 2 . 11/9/2010
Uwaa~ Loved this. I can't wate for the continuation!
A Twisted Fairytale chapter 2 . 9/16/2010
Oh, this is interesting! Can't wait to read more. :D
zoo-bie chapter 2 . 9/16/2010
Haha, here comes another crappy review that HowToSaveALife6398 complains about. But I do love the story, it's really exciting. I feel this insane hunger for reading more, I want to know from where Jayden recognizes Alex's eyes (although I have my suspicions ;) ). Anyways, you're doing a really awesome job, please keep it up and I'll love you forever!
diwu6398 chapter 2 . 9/15/2010
I didn't mind clock buddies, because the teacher picked them. I don't have any this year, though. xD I was going to ask about the locker combo!

I really like the little piece about the mom; makes me feel all sad for Jayden inside. I LOVE THAT NAME! xD It's a girl name too.

I also enjoyed how you described his closet.

My God, I don't know how you manage to balance that speech/ detail thing so well! I'm jealous...

You can say whatever you want in an author's note ;) Complain about shit! That's what the internet's for! xD

Nomzi nom nom love,

diwu6398 chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
Ugh, you have the worst reviewers in the history of reviewers! But I'll review you well!

I really liked how you jumped right into the action, but it wasn't too exciting. It was perfect. I like 'Suri' so far, and I'm interested in seeing if/ how Max plays a role in this story.

I didn't like the chapter length, but first chapters are hard.

Nice job, I'll read more when I have a chance. For now I'll just alert/ favorite.
crazystalkerchick chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
This is so good! im really looking forward to an update :D
DRAGONFIRE04 chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like the story and can't wait until the next story.
A Walking Wonder chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
I think it was a good start to the story. You just had to leave us hanging though _ But nevermind that. I really like it. So, please update soon!