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Reviews for
Memorabilia
Random-Idiocity
chapter 1 .
9/14/2010
''With every wave that crashed and every sparkle of water in the sunlight'' I really enjoyed that part. Keep it Up!
Ivan Shorn
chapter 1 .
9/14/2010
Very good flow, it seems to coast along, the imagery washing over me like waves. Good job, keep it up!