Reviews for All Things Misspoken
LuxAurorae chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
Excellent piece with a compelling voice and promising storyline. The grammar is clean. I could do without the explanatory paragraph, starting with "My name is..." preferring instead, for the information to be revealed during the scene with the council itself. That's a stylistic choice though, and it does help with keeping the story's fast pace. Wonderfully written!