really, really beautiful.

This reminds me of something that Arthur Rimbaud wrote about how, in soaring to heights exceeding our normal bounds, there is perhaps some intrinsic risk of being changed, harmed, but that the knowledge of where we have been and, even more than that, the simple fact that we have been there, can never be taken away, even if we are unable to fully comprehend its implications.

This is beautifully constructed, in its simplicity.

i love this.

This is so beautiful

Wow, hehe ] Now that I just read your poem, I'm sure Icarus lied too. This is very nice! Love the ending; perhaps the wings are charred indeed... but who cares, if we can still soar.

wow, that's all I can say. I loved it.

this is one of the most amazing poems i have ever read.

while short it is absolutely filled with emotions and imagery that completely takes the reader in.

breathtaking.