Reviews for i have tasted the sun
stars shine out chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
really, really beautiful.
All Along chapter 1 . 10/27/2011
This reminds me of something that Arthur Rimbaud wrote about how, in soaring to heights exceeding our normal bounds, there is perhaps some intrinsic risk of being changed, harmed, but that the knowledge of where we have been and, even more than that, the simple fact that we have been there, can never be taken away, even if we are unable to fully comprehend its implications.

This is beautifully constructed, in its simplicity.
punctured.lungs chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
i love this.
Phibonacci chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
This is so beautiful
Nyrihaz chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
Wow, hehe ] Now that I just read your poem, I'm sure Icarus lied too. This is very nice! Love the ending; perhaps the wings are charred indeed... but who cares, if we can still soar.
truthisalie chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
wow, that's all I can say. I loved it.
speakeasy-love chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
this is one of the most amazing poems i have ever read.

while short it is absolutely filled with emotions and imagery that completely takes the reader in.