|Reviews for A Muffled Cry|
| Loss of Words chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
A bit avante-garde; I feel like the meaning of it was lost. There's no focus, reason, or real emotion behind it, other than the fact that the person is crying. I like the idea of using a lot of sounds as the basis for the poem, it's a cool idea. I would love to see some development though - what is the reason for the crying, or the actual emotion behind the tears? A single line, or even a single word, can bring this whole thing into focus and make it super-clear. :)
| MyMoodRingIsPurple chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
I don't get it.
| lymli chapter 1 . 9/15/2010
very desperate and sad.