|Reviews for Do You Need Me? I Need You|
| Archia chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
This is really good. I like how you have the two different voices. The inner voice seems to have a formality to its tone. I like how they don't say much in their sentences. The first sentence opens it up for the rest of it.
This is really random, but this makes me think of a 'stop smoking' ad, just the way they speak or something.