Reviews for Crashing Down
Cayenne Kelpie chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Feels more like lyrics than a poem, like it should be set to music. But then, I guess that all music is poetry, of a sort. Cayenne.
Subbie chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
Wow this is amazing. totally relates to me.
truthisalie chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
I actually feel like it could be a song too! it's nice.

p.s : you forgot the 'e' in shine
paradisgatan chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
I think this would make a great song. Sorry if that comment's a bit out of the blue, but that's the feeling I get from the rhyme and rhythm and emotion in the piece. Good stuff.