Reviews for Hot Chocolate and Hugs of Solace |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was absolutely adorable! You're an amazing writer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not a huge fan of Taylor Swift, but I have seen the music video to this song, and it was definitely cute! And I loved your story-it was super sweet and insanely adorable ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! Truthfully, I read it because it's based on Mine, which is a favourite. I loved how you majorly stuck to the song & video(like the beach, him being in college, working at the cafe) but added your own twists to it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVED IT! :) I have to admit, the reason I read the story is because it said that it was based after Mine. I expected it to be good, and you didn't disappoint! This was FAB. I especially |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh~~ I like this ). The first person, second person, "you" thing is so awesome! (and matches the song!) I like that this kinda spans a long section of time; I always feel that the little moments in time show development really well. The lyrics fit well with the fic, and using the lyrics to end the fic is great, and I love the dialogue and the cafe portion ). Nice job, Lhoran |
![]() ![]() ![]() i think this is AMAZING :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi Cheryl. I was really distracted by the Taylor Swift song, though I know I gotta understand that's where you drew inspiration from. However, I really liked their interaction at the cafe - how it wasn't rushed and how subtly they fell into a routine that eventually led to something more. Cheers! |
![]() ![]() :D that was cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw! i like it! but i have a question though.. when will you update your other stories? :) |