Reviews for Barriers
3M2R chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
Maybe because i read the other write (the wave) first, so this pales in comparison to that. Somewhat disappointed with this write... as if it's lacking something... I don't what is lacking, but it just doesn't make the reader feel anything... It's just like a bystander viewing a very boring life of another person.

The beginning was good though. The repetition isn't impacting, like the other write (the wave).

Well, since this is an earlier write, so you probably didn't have as much experience as you do when writing the wave.

Still, continue writing. I look forward to more of your writes.

Although I sure do think that you can excel if you write more passive writes (like writing about non-living things or weather, etc).
lymli chapter 1 . 9/25/2010
aw, that's sweet, the title is perfect 'cause sometimes people don't need words to start something.