Reviews for Paul, i
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
Review marathon! (link in my profile)

That middle stanza seemed odd to me... I dunno I guess I didn't get the connection between looking someone in the eye and the idea of continents vs. centuries. I also didn't get how looking someone in the eye was an injustice.

I did like the piece though, I thought the comparisons in the beginning was really great. It was a unique idea. I also liked the ending. It was really sweet and reassuring.
Bonjour Skitty chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
This is a unique take of someone's personality. I find comfort in the quirks as well. As usual, this is a wonderful adaptation of emotions and the people they embody.
Heartafire chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
You have a wonderful gift with words and expression.
dying-egypt chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
I really quite like this poem, very short, but very moving.

Small question though, did you mean "continents", as in one of the huge landmasses of planet Earth, or "cotenants", as in a roommate?
Stefan chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
another really good poem, you have a lot of talent.