Reviews for Not Falling
Miffle chapter 1 . 9/25/2010
Oh, this is so good! I love it so much :D Keenan is just the cutest thing ever and I've been laughing so much it's brilliant. I especially love "wind's balls", it's just so funny and creative. And the fantasy element to the story really added, I felt, and made it different from all the high school drama type stories that are so common on fictionpress. A really amazing story - keep up the fabulous work :D
mangazan chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
That was amazing. Truly. Keenan is absolutely adorable and Ciaran's hilarious. The whole thing was just... great. The dialogue was wonderful and so were Keenan's thoughts and such. He's so cute, and the nymph and fantasy part of the story made it that much better. And Malachi... his part in the ending was priceless. Especially when he looked at Ciaran, saw he wasn't getting help from him, and ran away. I laughed so hard. xDD Oh my god, PLEASE do a story for Malachi and his pretty! His male pretty, if you please. xD I would really love to read it.
CookieWonderhead chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
Gorgeous