Reviews for Fall |
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![]() ![]() ![]() gosh its BEAUTIFUL dat shows HOW MUCH EXTENT he loves her god bless dem :) nice one :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was so cute:) a sequel? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Made me tear up. Beautiful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the sweetest short story I have seen so far. I think the best part was when he recited everything he knew about her when he was trying to show that he did care. Some more good points is that the dialogue feels very realistic, and that it ends with a good note because she decides to not jump off. You could add a little bit of description, like what Kelly looks like. Great one shot! |