This story is awesome!

More? Are you published? You are an amazingly skilled writer. I do hope you'll finish this story... or let me know if it's published so I can buy it and finish it. It's killing me! :)

oh man, I forgot that this wasn't marked "complete" as I was reading.

Now I see it's been a year since the last update... any chance you're still working on the story? I'd really love to read it in its entirety.

Amazing! Keep up the good work!

amazing work! i'v really enjoyed reading this! so excited for more!

oooh! Update soon!

Very interesting plotline; quite different and original! I'm enjoying it a great deal and am looking forward to reading how you develop the story.

Thanks for the update! It was nice to read from your story again.

-Silvermoon

I like a lot so far :]

Pam is turning out to be an amazing character, I enjoy about her Shane. And Shane... well, I'll just say he sounds brilliant too. This has been the best supernatural story I've found in a while! I hope you update soon :]

Hoorah! Good to see another chapter up.

Awesome work!

Can't wait till the next!

That was another great chapter. It was well written, I don't think I encountered any spelling or grammar errors. We see more of this bespellment towards the beginning of the chapter and then the intensity of her possible quick demise at the Lions' hands. It was kind of amusing to find out that the Lion that helped her was the omega. Overall it was smooth, well written, and I can't wait to read what happens next. Keep up the great writing.

What a story. So interesting and unique. I am completely hooked. Please, update as soon as possible.

Cool story- love the ideas! Please update soon!

-Silvermoon

Very intriguing and well written story. I look forward to your next update.