I really like this concept that you've got going and I think it has great potential. So far I don't have anything really give you any feedback on but if I find something I'll let you know. Keep those chapters coming and you'll definitely be hearing from me, ciao for now then:)

Your story has reminded me why I love reading supernatural pieces. As many previous reviews have stated, you're story is a quite different take than many others of the genre. You seem to have a good sense of the world you are creating, which makes my acclimation to it as a reader far more fluid. I also must say that the companion guide is an ingenious way to give background on the setting without saturating the story with it.

With so many cookie cutter werewolf/vampire stories out there, yours is quite refreshing and shows so much promise. No pressure, right?

I look forward to the next chapters! In the meantime, I'm off to read your other stories.

I really like the way you are writing and the story is so different!

Go on!

L

Can't wait for more!

That was a fantastic chapter. It was well written, I didn't encounter any spelling or grammar errors. It was clear and was not confusing at all to read. We find out that Pam is well versed in the markings and spells, which is interesting. I like how she admits her bias but still goes through with her plans. She has a vast knowledge of these things and is surprisingly quick at guessing that Shane was be-spelled. And now she's biting the bullet to help out Miranda. It was a great chapter and was amazingly written. I can't wait to read what happens next, keep up the great writing.

Oh... plot thickens!

Definitely looking forward to more of this story, whenever you get it out.

Danke,

amusewithaview

It's always much more complicated than it seems.

Pam was a noble streak in her, brave of her since she seems to harbor predigest against those who mark unwilling recipients.

Glad to see you writing again!

This is an interesting story, and that was an interesting chapter. It was well written, I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors. The material is very thorough, and it's easy to get lost, but I think I'm starting to understand the background of the story better. It's interesting, the politics, but definitely depressing about her sisters and the possible fate of Miranda. Keep up the good writing, I look forward to reading your next update.

Wow, you have a way with words. I enjoy how you the detail you put into your story is not superfluos and helps it along. The charachters are interesting too _. I look forward to your next update.

Oh. Okay, your explanation and backstory involving the scar marks given by shifters is incredibly creepy and disturbing. I LOVE IT. I am very excited to see more, and of course my inner feminist is crying out in anger over the perceived power imbalance inherent in the situations you are depicting.

Can't wait to see what you do next!

please write more this story is so good

i think it could turn out great

Well, I'D like to see where this goes. It's an interesting and unique set-up.

Great to see you back! Once in a while, I reread all my favorite stories. Imagine how happy I was, when I realized that you started writing again. Please update soon. The plot so far sounds exciting!

This is really good; it's really detailed and well thought out! Update soon!

Good teaser, I want to read more! Nice quip about the Pocket Guide. Nobody ever reads the manual.