|Reviews for Becca Brown|
| Insomiak chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
You asked me awhile ago to check your stuff out, and I forgot until now. Sorry!
This is written very well. There are a few lines that don't fit (just my opinion), like this one: " I…I can't die maybe; just maybe he had an ounce one ounce of sympathy! But, no. I will not beg I have to stay strong to the very end!"
But your descriptions are good, I really felt the fear when I read "The man's soft, creepy voice penetrated the silence."
You should keep writing, regardless of reviews. Writing should be about writing, not... reviews :) I know how it feels to work really hard and not get any feedback, but don't let it stop you! Your style is good, so keep at it.
| fusedtwilight chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
Oh, murder mystery. Always fun. It's always fun to see who did it and why.