|Reviews for Never Neverland|
| My.Evil.Cookie chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
Hm, this is really interesting. And this just oh so happens to be the first story that I will put on my alerts and fav list :)
| Love Squared chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
This is very interesting. It is an extremely well written prolgue that keeps the reader in suspense and wanting more.
I like it so far. update would be appreciated!
| nathutch1996 chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
best prologue i have read so far. it caught me in awe. definitely waiting for the first chapter.
| xXDeactivatedxXxAccountXx chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
that sounds really intriguing! I can't wait to see what you write after this!
| AlreadyGone chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
I'm very intruiged by this story because you do want to know what's going on but you can't really figure it out for sure, there's always that doubt. I have no clue.
Really nice and I look forward to reading more!
| Eden chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
This sounds really fantastic! I am completely completely hooked now.
| thenewzerov chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
I like the idea for this story. You did a good job on the prologue, and starting to give a voice to the main character. That line "...living fucking hurts" gives them just a little bit of roughness that makes me like them already.
| castiel89 chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
AH! A Peter Pan story! You had me at Peter. Peter Pan is my FAVE Disney movie! I just.. Ugh. Words cannot describe how stoked I am now!
You must keep at this! I cannot wait to read more!
| eripride247 chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
I love it already, and you know what I would love more the second chapted up before one week.
But, no pressure ;D
| Katie-Maude chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
Interesting beginning that draws the reader in and makes me just want to read more. My only concern is that this will be more of a fanfiction continuation of Peter Pan. Although I think it would be intriguing if the main character wasn't Wendy but rather a new character.
That being said it is a good beginning and definitely makes me want to read more.
| AmandaHold chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
it's an intresting start. i'm intrigued to read more after that and the summary.
| Melodies of Life chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
Okay...You've got me hooked. Can't wait for more. :]
| scripted chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
Wow! I haven't read such a good first chapter from a new reader in a while!
I absolutely loved it!
Your vocab is absolutely amazing. It's that perfect balance between not too simplistic, but not so complex that it's left the art of using words well and is just being used to fill the writer's ego of how many big words he can fit into one sentence. I love the mixture of language and emotions throughout the whole thing so much! And how they use each other to empathise each other
| 3DarkLove3 chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
Yoo! I saw your message on SKoW and seeing as Peter Pan is definitely one of my top five favorites of all time, this seemed just like my cup of tea 3
And I loove the prologue. It gets a certain point across, while everything else is up in the air. Leaves everyone wanting to know what happens )
This is for sure going on my alert list
| XxShokixX chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
YAY! Something different to read, a new cliche of sorts :D I can't wait till the first chapter :)
There was just one little grammitical error that I picked up on, or it could be the fact that we're from different countries and say things differently.
"The moment I fell it was hard and fast that I hardly could distinguish it from a dream."
Should it not be "The moment I fell it was SO hard and fast that I hardly could distinguish it from a dream." ?
Anywho, I can't wait to read more :D