Reviews for Tangerine |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is incredibly similar to the movie Juno. Just an observation. But I also noticed you haven't written a chapter since the beginning of the year. That's all (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story, it's AWESOME! Update soon. :D Amz xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi there, Um, one thing. *love the ten minute pregnancy test thing* -note of sarcasm- Something about this story looks eerily familiar, and I wonder why? Oh right, Maddiecat has THE SAME EXACT STORY. I can honestly say, that as a fellow writer, IT IS NOT OKAY TO COPY. If you wanna write a teen pregnancy story, come up with your own idea, because realistically, Maddiecat has been writing Metamorphosis FOR YEARS. And I would know this because I personally know her. And you know what, she's too nice a person to tell you that you copied her, but seriously, she's already been copied off of once, and now you've done it too. Either come up with your own teen pregnancy story concept, or don't write about it at all. kthnxbainao! |
![]() ![]() i like it you should update |
![]() ![]() ![]() More :D As a reviewer I think I should make you aware that your chapter when Kate tells her parents sounds remarkably like the scene in Juno, regardless of if you've change names, relationships and a little of the script. In the unlikely event that someone reads this who was a part of Juno's production, it could be grounds for sueing your arse off. Just letting you know. But I do really like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! I can'twait to see what happens! Update soin! |
![]() ![]() Hey there! I love your story so far. Kate has an awesome personalityzm. Your details in the story are really good too. Can't wait for the the next chapter! (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story. I really like how tough Kate is and her free use of swear words... hmm, reminds me of someone. Oh yeah, me! :D Anyways, update soon, this is really good! :D ~isabel~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww, poor kate. her and Mira would actually get along great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hmm, the countdown on the pregnancy test seemed very familiar, where have i seen it before? lol, kidding. great chapter! Maddie |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice, sounds like you've given a lot of thought about what the characters will look like. off to the next chapter, Other other Maddie |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh! i like it so far. please write more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow!IN LOVE WITH THIS SHIT! xP CANT WAIT FOR MORE! . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Overreation much? Nina seems a bit dramatic lol. Please update, I like this so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story sounds VERY interesting...Update soon! |