Reviews for Tangerine
e.brooks chapter 5 . 12/20/2011
This is incredibly similar to the movie Juno. Just an observation. But I also noticed you haven't written a chapter since the beginning of the year.

That's all (:
AMZIEXXX chapter 6 . 11/6/2011
I love this story, it's AWESOME!

Update soon.



unheard-vanity chapter 2 . 8/5/2011
Hi there,

Um, one thing. *love the ten minute pregnancy test thing* -note of sarcasm- Something about this story looks eerily familiar, and I wonder why? Oh right, Maddiecat has THE SAME EXACT STORY. I can honestly say, that as a fellow writer, IT IS NOT OKAY TO COPY. If you wanna write a teen pregnancy story, come up with your own idea, because realistically, Maddiecat has been writing Metamorphosis FOR YEARS. And I would know this because I personally know her. And you know what, she's too nice a person to tell you that you copied her, but seriously, she's already been copied off of once, and now you've done it too.

Either come up with your own teen pregnancy story concept, or don't write about it at all.

ero chapter 6 . 6/21/2011
i like it you should update
e.brooks chapter 6 . 5/12/2011
More :D

As a reviewer I think I should make you aware that your chapter when Kate tells her parents sounds remarkably like the scene in Juno, regardless of if you've change names, relationships and a little of the script. In the unlikely event that someone reads this who was a part of Juno's production, it could be grounds for sueing your arse off.

Just letting you know.

But I do really like it.
Likewow5556 chapter 6 . 3/5/2011
I love it! I can'twait to see what happens! Update soin!
Jennifer chapter 6 . 3/1/2011
Hey there! I love your story so far. Kate has an

awesome personalityzm. Your details in the story are really good too.

Can't wait for the the next chapter! (:
iamisabeljane chapter 6 . 3/1/2011
Great story. I really like how tough Kate is and her free use of swear words... hmm, reminds me of someone. Oh yeah, me! :D Anyways, update soon, this is really good! :D

Maddiecat chapter 3 . 2/26/2011
aww, poor kate. her and Mira would actually get along great!
Maddiecat chapter 2 . 2/26/2011
hmm, the countdown on the pregnancy test seemed very familiar, where have i seen it before? lol, kidding. great chapter!

Maddiecat chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
Very nice, sounds like you've given a lot of thought about what the characters will look like.

off to the next chapter,

Other other Maddie
Rhapsodie chapter 4 . 9/27/2010
oh! i like it so far. please write more!
TheOneWhosAlwaysWaiting chapter 4 . 9/27/2010
n0b0die chapter 3 . 9/26/2010
Overreation much? Nina seems a bit dramatic lol. Please update, I like this so far.
Essence of Lily chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
This story sounds VERY interesting...Update soon!