Reviews for Time |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love the concept behind this piece. I think it's a really good analogy for the ravishes and astonishments of time, and some of the word play is really interesting, like "A way, and away." I'm not so sure about the line "( Oh My! )" though. It's a bit distracting, really - like an aside that's just a bit out of place, and maybe even a bit cheap. This is a great poem, in any case. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I kind of don't get it...mainly because I'm slightly idiotic and dumb...there are meanings in here that I can't work out...but the language, and the way you wrote it was so beautiful, and I don't want to wreck it by assuming wrong meanings :) |