Reviews for Escape
Nyrihaz chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
Interesting concept of yours here. Describing love through someone's eyes. I liked what you created. There is a special aura of something I can't quite point to the whole poem; a underlying sense of affection. I loved all the different descriptions to the same things. The panel of colors and images the poem paints.

Loved this sentence: "Within, a part of, drowning willingly." Such a nice use of words. Neat, really. Everything was great, actually.

-Nyrihaz
lymli chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
it's sweet, every lover needs to escape with who they love.