Reviews for A Dubious Goal
Negasi chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
Hello sir! I know I drop off the site sometimes, but here I am! And not a zombie yet! :D. I don't know how I missed this piece though. I have one word to say first. IMAGERY! IMAGERY! IMAGERY! It's like I'm reading a movie in my head if that makes any sense. Your choice of words is fantastic for lack of a better word (I think I just am in awe of this poem and it's made my brain mush). Love the beginning flowing right back into the ending. What starts in bed may end in bed or wherever it may be. Excellent excellent job sir!
Domina chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
I liked this a lot! It's superb use of both imagery and irony made for an entertaining read :)
Lord Darling chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
Wow. So hallucinogenic,so, well, whimsical.
Snowflakes Are Drifting chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
aw, that day will come, I assure you.
YasuRan chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
Okay, I admit. I liked 'the parting lip-bite that tornadoes a nervous system'. Ahem, very accurate...

Also, 'a stenciled nipple's ecstasy' made me giggle with the resulting mental images it produced.

While I'm not exactly sure what was the inspiration behind this, it sure made for something entertaining on my screen :)