Reviews for Taking matters into your own hands |
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![]() ![]() Thank you so much for existing and writing this! Q_Q I LOVED IT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I had Favorited this story ages ago and I had thought I left a review as well but apparently I hadn't but better late than ever. So because it is on my favourite list it's obvious that I had enjoyed this story a lot, enough to read it numerous times and I really hoped that you would actually turn this into a full fledge fiction and delve deeper into their relationship, how it started? how he treated her in the office? how they were after the breakup? and so forth, I think it would have made a very entertaining story and that way you could have made Julian work a little harder to gain her forgiveness because honestly I do agree with one of the reviewers Mischa did forgive him way too soon, If my boyfriend had humiliated me like that in front of a lot of people and then acted all possessive in the first sign that I moved on I would have told him to shove it, however I understood the fact that this is a one shot and you wanted to give it a happily ever after and It was very cute ending but yeah I still didn't feel the whole forgiveness thing, I guess it's because I'm personally a very strong willed girl and it would take me lot more than what Julian did to actually forgive him, and I was secretly hoping that Mischa showed that same will but still even though Jules was a douche in the beginning and I think he got let of too easily, I still think they make an adorable couple and it's clear that they both love each other a lot. Great Story, please make a one shot with Julian's POV, I would really love to see his thoughts and actions during the whole breakup, or make a full fledged story out of this please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww! Wow! This is really nice and cute! 3 it! Cheers, TQL |
![]() ![]() ![]() finally julian's said it! GOD! it's frustrating for the girl but at least they'll get married right? RIGHT? ... oh please make a sequel :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it. Just loved, loved, looooved it. (I read it twice already.) Do you know how badly I wanted to slap Jules at the beginning of the story? I woulda slapped him silly. A boy should always show off his woman, dammit. (I had this chant in my mind for this asshole: "Jules isn't cools!") But, in the end, he became tolerable. Especially when he announced to the paparazzi about his FIANCEE, Mischa. (Btw, I love that name. I might name my kid that one day.)So, yeah. Hot, sucessfully rich dude gets my vote in the end. ("Jules is cools!") This story was entirely sweet and I loved the end. Happy endings make the freaking world go round. And stuff. Thanks for sharing! -a LITTLE bit extraorindary. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Needs more feeling... :) some parts weren't needed yet there needed to be a bit more emotions surrounding the story. It's a favourite though! Just edit it, ~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww... what a lovely story... I would love to see Julian's POV. goo work |
![]() ![]() ![]() I want Julian's point of view pleaseeeeee |
![]() ![]() ![]() Make the Julian's POV. It would be perfect! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh please do Julian's POV! I enjoyed this, thank you. - |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly I would have liked this better if she had stood firm and told him that she would get over him, because she knew she deserved better. Or even just said outright that he broke her heart and so he would have to work to win back her trust. A bit more time of him cooling his heels on her terms wouldn't have been a bad thing. The whole possessive thing also really rubbed me up the wrong way- if it had been me, that would have been the point where I told him to get bent, or at least to come back later and try again when he was not bein possessed by a neanderthal. ... Other than that, I didn't mind this. It was fairly well-written, and most of the characters were fleshed out and original enough that my interest was kept... but man, I still maintain that Mischa forgave him way too easily. -Erisah |
![]() ![]() ![]() awwww! so cute! but I thought she forgave him a bit too easily...maybe that's just me... Ri |
![]() ![]() ![]() Super cute story! And yes, please please please do a Julian POV. I would love to read it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww.. cute story. I'm still not really sure i like julian.. i think he's a bit of a jerk but as long as mischa loves him that's all that matters! Great job with getting the emotions and things across and i liked the bisexual, and rather touchy feely boss. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was adorable! I absolutely loved it! ] |