i like it

This is a gripping story.

I really wish you would post more of your stories on fictionpress. I finished reading LIP on Textnovel but it was a struggle because Textnovel wouldn't cooperate! Til then I've started your other stories and re-reading LIP )

Do you post your novels/short stories on any other site?

I am really loving this story. The sex scenes are well-written and I love the relationship between Sophia and Victoria. My one criticism would be towards the earlier/middle portion of the story. I didn't like how long it took Sophia to change over from Dr. Baker to Collin, especially once they started their intimate relationship. Another is the amount of times he sneaks up her. A few times would be cute, but I feel as if you overused the devise.

Other than those two points, I love the story.

This is an awesome book! I cant wait to read more. Thank you.

Yay! She agreed! I can't wait to see what happensnext!

thanks for the update

i like the story line. and thanks for the quick update :)

FREAKING AMAZING! PLEASE update soon! I started reading this two days ago, and i haven't been able to stop. Beautiful story! :)

LOVE IT! Can't wait for more! :D

That was hilarious! lol. I would dance around laughing too if I were in her place. lol. I can't wait to see what happens next!

I couldn't help but laugh when I read the part where Sophia says "I'm coming" LOL. Humor is one of the things I like about this .

Great chapter! I think, though, you should edit the part about falling in love with a red haired six year old because it sends a wrong message. I love the story, and I also appreciate that you update efficiently!

I love this story. I has captured my attention and I read all this so quickly and was very excited to find that you had posted a new chapter after I had just finished reading the story. I can't wait to see where it goes. I love how I can picture what is happening in the story. Although I'm finding that I can't picture the characters well enough, maybe in the upcoming chapters you could describe their features and hair, even if just subtly. Thank you.

so just started reading this story. I really like it, and I like Sophia. While you're editing watch out for spelling errors you had a few in the first few chapters, mainly homonyms. Also would Victoria really have bonded instantly with Sophia like she did? Usually it takes kids a little while to come around(3 years and counting as a day care teacher, 1 as an "after school supervisor)