wow...this is really a fantastic story, i'm addicted!

Nice. lol. She needs to tell her dad soon. lol. I hope this doesn't cause another big fight. Although he doesn't seem as angry this time. I can't wait to see what happensnext!

This is a really good story. I really enjoyed reading it so far, but I just have one tiny problem with it. In the beginning I feel like the romance between Collin and Sophia drags out a little bit and it's a little bit..well it made me skim a little bit. But other than that, I love reading the chapters, and I really enjoy this story! I can't wait until the next chapter.

I love this story so far! I could not stop reading once I started. Sophia needs to tell her father ASAP and I hope Connor fully recovers! Post more soon, please!

Uh oh. Looks like trouble in, well not paradise, but the family. lol. And he can be so temperamental sometimes. lol. Although I can kind of understand his fear of being left again. I hope everything turns out well. Also, how many chapters does this story have? I can't wait to see what happensnext!

I absolutely love this story, hope you update again soon :]

This story is really good and I'm surprised it hasn't gotten more reviews. The only reason I think this could be is because the summary doesn't give a very good idea of what the story is about. Perhaps you could write a new one? Anyway, I really like this story and I hope you can update ASAP!

So I stayed up until 3 am reading this story and was promptly back at it when I woke up at 9 am. It's amazing and I can't wait to see where it goes! I secretly hope Sophia is pregnant D

That is hilarious! I can't wait to see Collins reaction to that costume! lol. I wonder where Allison went. I'm so glad you updated! I can't wait to see what happensnext!

that's just torture lol can't wait for more. this story is awesome )

I love this story! I heard a lot about it over at FF, but never read it. It's great that you made it your own. :) You're an amazing writer.

So happy with this decision of yours to post your stories in another site that I can access. I'll never get tired of reading your them over and over again. :)

Wish that when you have the inspiration to continue writing VFYH, you'll also post it here. Looking forward to reading all of your stories. thank you.

I'm happy that you are back on , I love your story's I'm hoping that MMofC will be back here soon.

that's just torture ending it there! lol really love where the story is headed though. i like how complicated the story line is, but its not so hard that you can't keep up with it. thanks for your great writing

This story is awesome so far. I cant wait to see where you take it next! Your posting it here as you edit right? Like I said, it's amazing. I have been hooked since I clicked on it. I couldn't put it down. And also, I haven't really noticed any grammatical errors.