Reviews for Royalty
RueRue1396 chapter 6 . 8/12/2013
i just had to write this before continuing Freddy might be kinda sleazy
but i kinda find him hilarious ( kinda...sleaxy)
bella chapter 12 . 8/4/2013
I just really wanted this story to end with Yermo and Kenny realizing they are in love and be happy together. Kenny could have realized princes come in different forms. Yermo could have realized he is suitable for a romance and interesting enough for someone to truly love him for him and want to be in a relationship just with him alone. Does Kenny really need that good looking prince to go along with Yermo? I don't like that message.
I liked Dmitri. But, I just wasn't as invested in his character. Certainly not from the beginning like I was with Yermo and Kenny. Sure, I wanted Dmitri to be happy too. But, in his own story, in his own way.
Guest chapter 12 . 8/4/2013
Well, I enjoyed this story.
I would have preferred a little more. Perhaps an epilogue. I get the feeling Kenny was a little overwhelmed at the end. With all the previous morning afters it would have been good to see the difference with this morning after. Just to really concrete their new relationship and new beginning.
I'm surprised with myself that I was okay with the end result. I caught on to the hints leading up to it and I was actually hoping I was wrong. But, I don't mind that I guessed correct as it seemed to come together and fit nicely.
I just really feel a need for a bit more closure for Yermo.
I enjoyed the journey. Loved it in fact. Thanks for sharing.
Preposterous chapter 12 . 7/9/2013
This is the most deviant romance I've read. Ever. And that includes 50 shades of gray. Unlike that poor excuse of a story, I enjoyed this one from start to end. The ending was perfect for the characters. Awesome job!
Preposterous chapter 10 . 7/9/2013
Oh man. At this point I'm not sure what to hope for but it's interesting just seeing the relationships unfold. Great story.
Preposterous chapter 8 . 7/9/2013
That's so bittersweet. I really had high hopes for Dmitri. Justin... not so much. But gosh darnit I really shipped Dmitri and Yermo.
Preposterous chapter 6 . 7/9/2013
So glad I found this story; it's a real gem. Right now I actually ship Yermo and the guy with the Russian name. They're a cute, uncomplicated couple.
Preposterous chapter 4 . 7/9/2013
Wow... Kenny needs to wake up and smell the roses right under his nose. St first I didn't have high hopes for Yermo but now I think his character is genius. I want my own yermo. Screw looks and romance. Anyway this has been an enjoyable read so far. I plan to finish the rest in one sitting.
Afan chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
Off to a really interesting start, i like it a lot.
chibikodo chapter 12 . 10/8/2012
I wasn't expecting polyamory b/c most stories don't end that happily (and I guess people don't think like me). But I'm glad that there was a happy ending. Silly Yermo, happy endings do exist!
myrt chapter 12 . 10/8/2012
you should put a warning of a threesome: not everyone is comfortable with open relationships. For my part I enjoyed the story, but I like to read about monogomous pairs. threesome don't appeal to me. I can't help but ascribe it to indecision (of the character or of the author) and to view it as inability to choose between two charming characters. thus such conclusions leave me unsatisfied.
I was lucky to have discovered this story when nearly completed, otherwise I'd have felt a lot more disappointed by the ending and not because of your writing style, but simply because of expectations raised by the lack of an appropriate warning.
Had I followed this story from the beginning, looking forward to every new update... at this point I'd have probably felt cheated and deceived (not deliberately on your part, of course) since I carefully try to evoid the genre of threesome/foursome/3plus, full knowing it's not my thing.
All this to say that it's important to put a fair warning to your readers when dealing with unconvetional pairings or practices.
jammi chapter 12 . 10/7/2012
I really enjoyed this story, I like that it was cute and light even while being unpredictable near the end. I'm glad there was a happily for now ending that has the potential to be a happily ever after if outside opinions don't influence them.
theStarfly chapter 12 . 10/7/2012
I like this ending. It's nice. I'm glad that they ended up this way. I wouldn't mind reading more of their story, though!
Cattails chapter 11 . 9/29/2012
My only coherent thought is: *_*
jammi chapter 11 . 9/25/2012
I don't know how I feel about this chapter. It's a great chapter as usual but I have this antsy feeling in my chest which is weird because things are bout to get worked out (I think).

I really like the sort of offhand details like the way Melinda want around getting his home address and the way Yermo was taught to deal with confrontation and the fact that he had no way of dealing with this since he couldn't get a grasp on the issue or the proper soothing words, lol.

I wonder how Kenny will respond to Dmitri's solution and if Yermo will just go along with it or if he'll actually want to give to a try.
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