Reviews for Black Water
WolfLover74 chapter 32 . 10/28/2010
Oh I truly loved that Lisa, Kenny, and Crystal are accepting him as part of their family. I can't wait for part 3!
WolfLover74 chapter 31 . 10/27/2010
I really like that Johnny is trusting Kenny more and more. It is like a pseudo father/son relationship. I'm really enjoying this story.
SecretRose88 chapter 31 . 10/27/2010
I keep picturing Johnny in a fishing hat with bright fluffy lures all over it. I'm not gonna lie... he's rockin' it!

Can't wait to see what happenes next!
Green Gummy Bear chapter 31 . 10/27/2010
This is great! I love how much they've bonded.

I think Kenny should get a chapter! All to himself.

Woo-Hoo! Internal conflict!
WolfLover74 chapter 30 . 10/26/2010
Oh wow. Crystal's natural instincts are kicking in. It's getting interesting.
WolfLover74 chapter 29 . 10/26/2010
This keeps getting better and better. Thanks for the update.
Green Gummy Bear chapter 29 . 10/25/2010
Wow! This is a spectacular story twist!

I'm eagerly awaiting more!

How many times have I told you how amazing a writer you are?

Oh, well, here's another one to add to the number!

-Gummy
Green Gummy Bear chapter 28 . 10/24/2010
Ooh! Cool. Does the skin close up too?
WolfLover74 chapter 28 . 10/24/2010
Thank you for all the wonderful updates. Oh Crystal's dad came back and all of sudden wants to see her! I'm so glad Kenny and Johnny both agreed that was wrong of Lisa to let him take Crystal with no information.
Green Gummy Bear chapter 27 . 10/23/2010
Haha! I think Johnny does belong.
Green Gummy Bear chapter 26 . 10/22/2010
-dreamy sigh

Johnny is quite the character. I love how creative you are about how he covers his trail.
Green Gummy Bear chapter 25 . 10/21/2010
AW! :'(

Poor Johnny! Now I get it. He refuses to mess up again... but how does he know for sure how to make the change on Crystal?

Or does he not quite know...?
Green Gummy Bear chapter 24 . 10/20/2010
Ooh! Burn!

So, if Uncle knows about the lake... why doesn't Ken- oh... the family doesn't know... only uncle...
WolfLover74 chapter 24 . 10/20/2010
Great chapter! I can't wai to see what happens next.
WolfLover74 chapter 23 . 10/19/2010
Oh I didn't expect Uncle Robert to offer the old Blood ritual to Johnny. I hope he really doesn't want to harm Johnny. Oh poor Johnny he just wants a family. Thank you for the wonderful updates.
50 | Page 1 2 3 .. Last Next »