Reviews for Vampire life |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I dont mean to be harsh but it's like a middle school student wrote this. I could get passed the first paragraphs. |
![]() ![]() ![]() what utter crap is this? if sam was his sister's daughter then samantha had to give birth to sam when she was 9. is logan dumb? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow this chapter really drew me in. Now I have to read the rest of the chapters. Choice writing my friend, keep it up |
![]() ![]() You need to work on your sentence construction an spelling. It's not fun anymore to see a lot of errors. I wanted to edit the words but this is not my story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was a good chap and i cant wait for more... so was this the last chap of this book or is there going to be one more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! great chapter! I so can wait until you start the new book to the series! There were some spelling mistakes, but overall I loved it:) Also it took me 22mins to finish this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very good chapter nice cliff hanger cant wait for more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter...but there were a lot of spelling mistakes when it was samantha POV. I had to go and fix all of them, it was driving me crazy!, but its all good now. Were you rushing to get this chapter up in class 2day? Lol anyways I cant wait for the last chapter! and the next book, Vampire Love! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this chap as well wat is the new one going to be called |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this chapter but not as much as the last one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! lol Jack cant remember anyone...tht not good:( Anyways cant wait for the next chapter, and the next series to vampire life! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes, I liked this chapter very much! Yeah I cant wait for the wedding, and find out what happens when logan and the rest wake up...that going to be interesting! Update soon:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was my fav. because Their finally engaged. They make a cute couple. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cant wait for the next chap |
![]() ![]() ![]() So far this is my favorite chapter. Really like it. |