|Reviews for Snapshots|
| WP chapter 3 . 3/25/2013
Is the bride supposed to be blind? Sweet.
| moongazer7 chapter 2 . 7/27/2011
an excellent story. I enjoyed it mostly thoughts but very interesting. kept me thinking and wondering.
| moongazer7 chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
interesting story first very cute then very exciting. I enjoyed the story quite well. I like the transition from smooth to rough. a very suttle but yet good transition. An interesting and traumatizing day especially for the boy. I wonder why the shot was fired. Good story over all!
| Kristina Suko chapter 3 . 12/24/2010
This is a really sweet piece. :) The only critique I have- in the first paragraph, you use "see" three times in close succession. I don't know if you meant it to be purposeful, but it kind of just felt repetitive.
Other than that, it was beautiful.
| Kristina Suko chapter 2 . 10/2/2010
"The constellation of pink stars on his left forearm," - I know what you're going for, but it just sounds to me like he's got pink stars tattooed on his arm.
Otherwise, both these little snapshots are awesome! I love that they're just moments in time. Both made me want to read more, yet they are complete in themselves.