Reviews for The Song of the Fire
Dreamers-Requiem chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
Nice poem, short but it works. Great imagery used, I can really see the fire as I read it. Awesome stuff; sorry about the short review but I really don't have much more to say.
Morine chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
It might be because of the title, but I feel like this poem should be turned into a song. It might also be the exclamation points. I always think of songs when I see exclamation marks in poems. I have no idea why.

Aw, I really liked it. It was short, but you used the words so well. I could really see the colors come to life with the words you used.

Some of my favorite words were: twirling, billowing, entwined, and flickering. Those words just added a lot to the imagery.

Good job! I wish I could write poetry like you!